Wednesday, February 06, 2008

"Abandonment"

broken walls, bricks astray
blocks wind no more
pebbly stream, scanty water
fallen bark stops flow

clouds gather, deny rain
trees flutter, deny fruit
standing there all alone
worries about no show

shifting weight, legs protest
twitching shoulders abreast
worried eyes betray fear
waits she furrowing brow

darkening sky, gloomy night
no shining armour, no knight
abandoned at the altar?
oh no! what a huge blow!

6 comments:

kunal said...

Runaway Groom?

nipun said...

abandoned at the altar ??
dude !!

Argentyne said...

i'm subscribed to your blog through google reader now :) read your poem, and liked it :) though i'm not even trying to understand it :P

Do the tag! DO IT. That's an order.

crazy said...

You come back with such a sad story !! >:P

p.s: good one !

Aravind Krishna K said...

so now tell me in gtalk the true story :P

mythalez said...

@kunal, lol .. I guess so

@nipun, dont blame me!! :P

@argentyne, why! i thought it was pretty straightforward! and yeah I shall do the tagpost .. soon soon :D.

@crazy, :P

@aravind, its your story bro .. you should tell us all the details :P